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from what i say in the passage on how Murray indentifies the certain information, audience, form, structure, developement, dimension, and voice for writers to examine when critically reading their drafts I would change my essay by including more information to try and get the readers to imagine in their head what they are reading. i believe now that if you can get someone to imagin and picture in their head what is being read, you did your job as a writer. there probably wont be any additional changes as I read the essay aloud to myself. the rest of the information influences me and the writing cuz it gives a strobger source of where the information is coming from